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[link] [link] Something different from my usual work. I tried to adjust the cat fur to make it look as natural as possible but I don't think I've made it right though. Btw, the cat is called Moonshine NOTE: I enable critique, but please be nice, okay?. If you're non-premium member and want to give critique just write in the normal comment box. Any suggestion is appreciated, thank u Credit for stock & resources: Cat: ~PhantasmaStock BG: ~AJK-Original-Stock Thank you so much for stock usage Thank you for comment & =============================================================================== I give permission to all of the clubs listed in my journal to submit this in their gallery. =============================================================================== NOTE: Watermark does not appear on finished prints. My work is copyright © Mohd Rosli (aka =moroka323/=moroka). All rights reserved. My work may not be reproduced or republished, in any way, manner or form without my written permission. My work does not belong to public domain. =============================================================================== Comments
I love the darkness and originality of this one, great job
-- Kind regards, Frank Enjoy my last News Article 'Finest Macro, Nature and Invertebrates in Squares' Not bad still though, the whole thing has a smooth look so the fur doesn´t stand out too much. Always a really pain to manipulate though, I´m working on a piece with a wolf in it, it´s driving me crazy.
Keep it up. -- Tired and lonely. Sitting and staring Weak and filthy. No longer caring Wasting to nothing. The rubble of you Hoping for something. Poison where love grew Really nice. I think I would have darken the tail a little more, but the rest is gorgeous!
-- "Someday you will find me caught beneath the landslide, in a champagne supernova in the sky ..." |
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April 24
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Critiques
Good points of the picture are composition, contrast and setup. While I do understand and enjoy the choice of a monochromatic color scheme, I think a small touch [ like in the cat's eyes ] of foreign color may have been a good punch - as cliché as that sounds.
My only other critique is that I'm not so sure of the texture of the fence. The clouds, cat's fur, and even to some degree the bird silhouette, are all softer textures. The harsh texture of the fence seems somewhat out of place.
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